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can this be a dream

inside where my two worlds collide
hate and love but one fo them is to late
i ran down the corrador of a life which was a lie
take the turn to fast turning these tears in to a lake
slit my wrist and take the hit
which way do i turn or do i flip the switch
you did your damage to me, that you all ready knew
kiss my ass and take the glory thats what i miss
from our love-hate relationship that has come

inside is the best place to hide
turning left all i feel is the burning
of the hate that you used to kill our love
spinning around i see a door with death grinning
go fast see what it can show
twist the knob and see threw the mist
your standing strong on the other side of the door
can this be a dream?

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i tried some thing new i hope you guys like it, i think i like this style more then the old style i use
Written May 12th, 2005

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  • imprisoned
    May 13, 2005
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    This is really good. I like this a lot. I am bookmarking it. Great job and later. I like this cuz I can relate to it a lot. Later.