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Pure Pleasure Part II

Beautifully wet bodies
Rubbing against each other.
Your hands so warm
Up my leg.
I want to bolt up and cry your name,
But the power of your tongue,
Holds me down.
I see your head move up my chest,
And I look into your eyes,
You show me the look of discreet deception,
Of how pleasure should be.
You roll us over
With almighty power.
what do you want me do?
I use my hands to please you
And lick your soft yet hard chest,
I have succeeded!

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Written May 12th, 2005

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  • natari gold member
    September 14, 2005
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    Oh my this makes me want some steamy hot ....Well anyway great visuals and good luck in the contest


  • gothangel
    May 23, 2005
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    awesome poem and good luck in my contest

  • l-u-b-y-l-o-o
    May 13, 2005
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    hehe, this is funny! made me laugh, specially coz ur sitting next to me...im a little bit shocked...who is this about?! lmao!


  • lollylou
    May 12, 2005
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    Me likey very muchey,,, (maybe im just a perv ) oh well this is fabbo! kindest regards lolly x