Verse 1:
We stare into eachothers eyes but i know you dont see me,
The songs you sing are for a an unforgotten love...
I thought that it was me,
But now I know that just can't be,
It can't be me.
Chorus:
Maybe we're perfect, a match made in heaven,
I'll smile and pretend with you...
But forever will never last,
With the pain of the past,
But for now I'll stay and be in love with you.
Verse 2:
Maybe I didn't love you yesterday, But you know what they say,
It doesn't take a day to be heartbroken...
But you wouldnt go away,
untill the day that I say,
yes I wanna be with you.
Chorus
Verse 3:
I remember the first day we met,
And I knew that I would end up with you...
But end up means forever,
and forever is never,
Because of the pain she put you through.
Chorus
Verse 4:
I know inside you really do love me,
But a memory is playing with your heart...
I didn't want to love you,
But I think I'm starting to love you,
I wish you didn't love me from the start.
Author notes
Well, this is the first song I've ever written so I really would like some coments...
thanx
--for the contest--__
I have read and commented on: Twelve red roses by masterblaster, Somebody's daughter by your messiah, and my suicidal bride by leather face, and I have read and commented on hotel room and the baby by black mistress
Written May 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Move Me by -your-chaos-theory-.
300 points, ended June 3, 2005, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awwwwwwww thanx
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This was really great, especially for your first song write. I thought the last three lines were really sweet in a way. Great write
Rosie x -
I didn't write any music, I just had a song stuck in my head that I hadn't heard before and actually I can't even remember what it was but whatever it was the words went with it so... ya
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great
this is a really cool song!! did u write the music to it to? is there even music to it or are you working on the music.........anyways keep up the good work -
this is a really good write! it probably rocks even more with the music added to it! is there music with it or did you just write the verses and the chorus? whatever.. it's really cool tho!
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