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Dreamer

When i dream i think of you.
i could spend my life in this sweet surrender,
i could spend my life in this moment forever,
from now on of this moment i will treasure,
with you and me we can be together.
but then i wake up,
i eat my breakfast and i go to school,
i wonder what to say,
i wonder what to do.
then i sleep and i think of you,
i could spend my life in this sweet surrender,
i could spend my life in this moment forever,
from now on of this moment i will treasure,
with you and me together,
but then i wake up,
then i realise it will never be true,
you never be with me and i will never be with you,
from yours truly, dreamer.

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Written May 11th, 2005

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