Mystical and magical forces created
by the ungodly in galactic space
transformed into hypnotic beauty
to enslave earth's human race.
Satan pulls in the lost and the weak
then sends them to the abyss below
but for those who believe in God
they are safe for God loves them so.
Satan is disguised in the beauty
as the lavender blue crystals entice
showering down they weaken your will
it is your mind you shall sacrifice.
The forces of good and of evil exist
there are light and dark forces too
with God in your mind for protection
evil and darkness can not befall on you.
So beware all that glitters is not gold
Satan will temp you and steal your soul
always keep God Almighty in your heart
His love is pure and it makes you whole.
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Written May 11th, 2005
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This is not only beautifully written, but it holds a powerful message that we all should heed. Excellent take on the picture. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Two Thumbs up!
Hi, this poem is so sweet. I love poems that are a testament to God's love. I can identify so heartily with the line, "they weaken your will
it is your mind you shall sacrifice".
I'm graduating with my B.A. degree in English Language and Literature with Education. And the three years it took me to getmy bachelor's was such torture for my soul! I was bombarded with anti-God literature like you wouldn't believe while I was there at university.
It's only now that finals are done that I'm healing a bit. Your mind really is the first thing that is attacked. I reached a poitn where I couldn't even study. The Christians I met at university were either not practicing thier faith and not living the life, or near fanatical. I didn't know which was worse. It took meeting a sweet Muslim girl to actually pull me back to my Catholic faith!
There are so many traps for us to fall into. REally, it is only God that saves us.
I just read a poem by your friend Reborn Jesus Freak.
You guys are great!
I look forward to reading more work by you guys!
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Wow thank you for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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And I forgot to add... the rhyme and meter were both startlingly perfect. ^_^
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This is such an encouraging poem, I enjoyed reading it so much. To me, it was one of those poems that I just could not read without it lifting my spirits. Its message was so honest and kindhearted; I really liked the 'gentle' way you conveyed your thoughts and this scenario. Great link to the picture as a symbol, too. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandy this is a wonderful poem! Well done!
I enjoyed reading it
Di
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Thank you so much Donna for reading and commenting on my poem. I do appreciate it. God Bless and take care, Sandy
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Ah Thank you Weldon. I so appreciate your wonderful comment. It is nice to hear from you. Hope all is well with you. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the nice comment. It is always appreciated. Take care annd God Bless. Sandy
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment pozo. It is great to hear from you. I hope all is well with you. Well take care my friend. God Bless. Sandy
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A great write.
Sandy..
I agree with all those above. The rhyme and the rhythm flow perfectly. You have a great message delievered here. Keep the ink flowing and best of luck in the contest. Love and hugs...
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Great message of truth delivered with artistic finesse. Great rhythm and rhyme. I think its sad so many people think it unintellectual to believe Satan exists. You should do very well in the contest
~Weldon
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This is wonderful, As always .
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Beautiful rhyme, this is so true Keep writing, this was a fantastic poem
All the best,
Pozo
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