I wait hear silent, heart a grieving
And all I knew, a soul seething
For you, were packing, your were leaving
Hello, Goodbye, Get Out
Being the woman other, love is a waste
The money laid out out, the hurried haste
But the blood in my mouth, is nothing, to the look on your face
Hello, Goodbye, Get Out
The bruised you left have all corroded
The shotgun shells have just imploded
Your throat, my trigger, just exploded
Hello
Goodbye
Your Gone.
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Written May 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love hurts by nolonger.
400 points, ended May 23, 2005, 25 entries
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Wow, This is very good, "blew" me away, lol, This is great and a wonderful twist, Here at first i thought you were just kicking this person out and wow, a smack in the face, or shot in the neck, great write, Thank you for entering and good luck
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