option #1
For the life of me,
I cannot explain,
How the look of your face,
is like a summer rain.
One more needed than any other,
because i was a drought,
but you saved me,
now I'm yours without a doubt.
You spirit glows,
more vivid than the sun,
how rare it must be,
to find a love like this one.
Your graceful moves,
are like a tonic.
but one trouble remains,
and it's quite ironic.
You're everything to me,
but you know not my name,
so how can we be,
when you don't feel the same?
Author notes
Written May 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- Poetic Geniuses only....best of the best by Kasheera.
400 points, ended June 24, 2005, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a nice poem..... far from your best but i liked it
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I think you've captured the feeling of love given to one who doesn't know. I can feel the longing and the pain through your words and I can easily relate. I think you've done a terrific job here. Keep up the good work!
~Elizabeth
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