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the root

all the orders have been delegated
and each has been regulated
the only thing that ties us down
is the deflugation constipation creation
all the orderlies failed to find
what the problem really happens to be:

too many chiefs and not enough indians

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Written May 10th, 2005

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  • sofargone
    August 12, 2006
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    Well Said

    very interesting. .i completely aggree . . I too have been published in an anthology with other writers from their affilliate poety.com "Reading Reasoning" check it out. And Congrats.


  • kryspin
    March 27, 2006
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    oh wow! yippy! that's awesome...i'm feeling like a kid in a candy store right now. if i were a kid that liked candy

  • ea silver member
    March 26, 2006
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    Congrats! This poem will be included in the anthology for short humor. Please IM me with a short bio (one line) to be included in the end notes.
    It can be funny or serious, include your real name or not.


  • rufina caraid gold member
    March 23, 2006
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    I do like this! All those idiots making the rules and no-one there to actually 'do' anything to put them into action.
    This could have been written about anyone, anywhere and it would still hold true.
    Well done
    Von