I feel different
out of place
like I'm the only one that feels this way
I'm the only person that sees imperfections
but not on others
but on my own face
wondering why
why i was put here
my parents say i was put here to ruin there lives
My brother and Sister ask why don't i just go back to where i came from
i might need to
just to make everybody happy
since we know of course the world doesn't revolve around me
which i am reminded of everyday
i know longer know where i belong
i know longer feel wanted
people have balled me up and thrown me away
so i might as well let go
and leave this world without a say
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Written May 10th, 2005
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excellent
i like it. its deep and i like that. good job. -
HEY I really like this one..I think it's one of your best yet...I'm gonna put it on my wall with the others I have from our KW KIDS!!! lol..Don't feel bad though....It'll get better, and I STILL love ya...Don't I count anymore?!?!!?
~DAniela
Edited on May 13, 5:31 p.m. because 'because'. -
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wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww casey that was really good you shouldnt feel that way about your self! but i LOVE YOU
~chelsea~ -
aww babe i love this...i know how you feel..believe it or not ive had thoughts like this too and ive even taken it too far...but i love you and if you need to talk ill always be here for you(only cause you told me that you thouht that i was a hoe!) lol love ya xoxo
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this is really good.. i like it alot.. ic an relate to that feeling.. great job.. babe.. xoxo stac
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lol...your so gooffy!! gotta love ya though
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lol..never mind i was right..hah!..lol.
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never mind..lol..i read it wrong..hehe..great write!.
-Britt -
taht was great babe..but i think that maybe your forgot a word at the end of the first line of the second paragraph thingy..lol..taht was confusing..but it was great..luv ya lots
-Britt
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