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Thank You Charles

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Charles Simpson
(Onfire4Jesus)

The words in your Mother's Day Poem
are so very meaningful to me
to have you love me as a mom
son it means the world to me.

I keep getting blessed by God
each day you show me such love
bonded through Christ as mother and son
by the powers of God up above.

To be loved as your mother
has my heart full of joy
Charles I love you as much
as if I had raised you as a boy.

The wonder of God filled my heart
then He told me what I should do.
the moment I started reading your poem
Charles this mom fell in love with you.

It touched my heart to see the pain
you endured as a sweet little boy
I wanted to reach out to you son
and give you so much love and joy.

We two have the love of Christ
deep in our hearts and minds
we have both found the Lord
and left our broken lives behind

Now you are my youngest son
you captured my heart with your smile
I want to tell the whole wide world
how much I love you my sweet child.

You Mother's Day poem made me cry
I now truly see what I mean to you
I will be your mom forever my son
and forever I will always love you.



Author notes

Charles I cried all while I wrote this. You will never know how much you wanting mwe to be your mom means to me. I will always be here to listen to your saddness like last night. I will comfort you in and always be here to listen. I will be here to share in the joy as we worship together every Thursday. It is such a joy to here you sing and pray with me.And this mother will miss you dearly with all my heart when you are out at sea and then when you leave for Hawaii. If my grandson is deployed to Afhghanastan this year , I don't know what I will do if both of you are gone.  I know God will be you both but it won't be easy. I love you son and I always want you in my life.Thank you for making me feel special each time you call me mom. God Bless you always. Forever your Mom

HERE IS A LINK TO THE POEM HE WROTE
allpoetry.com/Poem/1249176
Written May 10th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    May 19, 2005
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    Ah thank you so much for the beautiful comment. Yes this young man is very special. He serves his nation and his God with all his heart. Take care and have a wonderful day. Sandy

  • Bluestar
    May 17, 2005
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    Thank you for sharing this poem. It is so intimate and personal I felt a bit rude reading it. Your emotion was evident through this whole write, and you kept the rhyming scheme up very well. This was touching to read

    Best of luck

    Blue*

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 11, 2005
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    You are so nice to leave such a lovely comment Carl. This is a very special young man who has captured my heart as a mom. God has blessed both of our lives. Thank you for taking the time to read this poem. I hope all is well with you Carl. It is nice to have you as a friend on here. I always love hearing from you. God Bless, take care, Sandy
  • MR Frood
    May 11, 2005
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    Amazing

    wow what to say to this, i mean it is a great poem, full of love, and raw emotion, i can feel where you are coming from.
    It amazing what a few words thrown together can do to peoples emotions. Very well done, now i need to read more of yours.

  • Dreamweaver silver member
    May 11, 2005
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    A beautifull and touching poem of two hearts being laid side by side ... the bond of love so evident.
    An amazing poem ... Thank you Sandy.

    Sammy

  • chintzy faberge
    May 11, 2005
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    10 claps

    Wow...there really aren't any words, are there? Too see something so deep and just so emotional makes all of my stuff look so shallow...you are very lucky to have such a special poem. The way this was written was perfect. Good job.

  • John Yelling
    May 11, 2005
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    This so beautiful and heart-wrenching. you both are lucky to have each other.

  • E A Collins
    May 11, 2005
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    Perhaps this is one not to comment on, save to express the joy in its sweetness.

  • Blazing White Wolf
    May 11, 2005
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    this is a well written write that is embedded with loving emotion and feelings. You did a wonderful job on this wonderful pen
    love and light
    blaze

  • after-dark
    May 11, 2005
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    Not 2 bad here overall,you wrote this one very well and it works for just what it is. Keep it up here with this. Well thought out piece,good job here on it.

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 11, 2005
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    Thank you so much Janai for the lovely comment on Charles poem. I so appreciate it. I hope you have a great day. God Bless and take care, Sandy

  • CountryCousin
    May 10, 2005
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    Very loving.

    We will pray for their safety and ask that God keeps them secure in his net of love and security. I still like this one and have read it twice. It is still very loving thing to do.

  • Onfire4Jesus
    May 10, 2005
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    Through heartaches and tears
    and through all the pain
    I will always be here for you
    and dance with you in the rain

    I will jump up and down and
    wrap my arms around you
    I will jump in the mud puddles
    and watch you shiver so blue

    This poem you have written
    has brought this man to tears
    And I will walk with you to
    help calm you through your fears

    From now and forever till
    time will be no more
    I will walk with you hand in
    hand through Heaven's doors

    We will walk we each other
    for the rest of our lives
    And we will never have to
    worry about sad good-byes

    I love you now because
    you have touched my heart
    I love you for eternity
    and I know we'll never depart

    So thank you for being you
    and meaning so much to me
    I look forward to being with you
    forever and throughout eternity

    Sandy, you always counter-act every poem I write with the most amazing and the most beautiful and sweet-sensation poems that anyone could every think of writing. You have really blessed my heart and touched me in such a mighty way that I can't even explain it. I love you more than anything. You are my mom now and forever and I am proud to be your son Thank You for everything and thank you for meaning so much to me!! I love you so much mom!! Take care my friend!! God Bless You!!!

  • May 10, 2005
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    aww Sandy, This is...just amazing. So much love and affection between the two of you. This is the sweetest thing I have ever read. It almost broke my heart. Great write, Although it sounded like it just came pouring from you beautiful soul. Excellent hun..


    Lots of love hun
    Janai

  • Ladybug
    May 10, 2005
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    tis the grand beauty of the love between those called family bonds of those we meet through the blood of christ and we know who our true family is....
    this is truly special from you both.

    Tamara

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 10, 2005
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    Oh, Thank you so much Shannon. I so appreciate the lovely comment. It is always so nice to hear from you my sweet AP daughter. God Bless you, Sandy u

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 10, 2005
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    This was such a wonderful comment you left on my poem. I so do appreciate it. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 10, 2005
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    Ah thank you so much for the nice comment you left on my poem. It is so appreciated. This was so wonderful to werite for him. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy

  • beautifulbrat
    May 10, 2005
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    awww this is so sweet! i always love reading the poems you and Charles write for each other! they touch me so much Mom. Great write. I love you!

  • Windworder gold member
    May 10, 2005
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    Two fitting tributes for a family that know the meaning of a God-Blessed love for one another. Thanks for letting us share in you private joy.

  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    May 10, 2005
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    aww... Sandy... This such a wonderful poem you've got here forCharles... Im sure he'll love it and promoter it again Take Care
    Di
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