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Dark hatefilled passions

Dark hate filled passions
Screaming voices in my head
Lonely Silent Eras of Depression
Mourning on my Bed

An Eternity Of Death
Detachment only "our kind" know
Stealing my victims last breath
Stalking you in nights shadow.

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Written May 10th, 2005

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  • ArchangelMichael
    May 13, 2005
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    Great job baby. I love how you can capture the essence of something like you captured the essence of a vampires immortality and pain they must face. Wonderful piece.