Are you near me?
Because I feel you
Coming to me;
Deep in my heart.
Each day that passes the
Feelings become stronger,
Good to see that you’re near.
How long I have waited for you
Imagining how you look, you’re
Just as I dreamt you would be,
Kisses so sweet we have shared
Love came to me last night
Made me feel complete.
Never have I known such a love;
Oh please come to me my love!
Passion reigns within my veins
Quietly I whisper your name;
Reaching out to hold you near
Sadly you’re not there at all.
This was just a dream I had of
Us wrapped in each others arms.
Visions of a love so strong and
Wishing you were here with me.
Xhilaration fills my yearning heart
You are my dream man, my soul mate;
Zoom in to me now, please I beg of you.
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Written May 10th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Do you know your Alphabet? by DarlingStac.
500 points, ended May 14, 2005, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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HMMM, I have told you before Mia, I not telling..........that's my secret, and nobody knows, I gave you a hint before, but you must not have seen it, I told you that you know him, that's all I'm telling you. You ain't gonna prise it out of me...So forget about it, I ain't talking..So There
Jennifer
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This was great Jenn. Now you really have to let me know who it is! It just isnt fair that you wont tell me....... Cmon whisper to me I promise not to tell...........well Ill try not to tell
Loved it.
and Luvs Mia
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Hi Yemm, how are you? long time no hear
glad you liked it my friend
Jennifer
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Sadly you’re not there at all.
This was just a dream I had of
I actually felt sad when i read those lines. Odd how a poem can be so effective that we cheer for the speaker. It is indeed a poem of hope and desire...By you find such pleasure and happiness. -
OMG i have no idea how you do that it is so hard. LOL
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no.. i said.. an acrostic like this.. by cc not the title.
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I never realized Vic, I will change the title
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3 stars ***
i once read a poem like this by cc ... so it wasnt like the first time i read such.. but hey.. then u tried it and made a much better poem.. i enjoyed it now.. except that i had to look out for the meanin of that Xhilaration, that was first time i read it.. anyways.. take cares and have a nice time .. just keep it up. -
this was soo good.. i loved it... i can relate to that feeling.. great job..thanks for entering.. xoxo stac
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a very romantic read
What a delight to read, very sweet and deep...a very nice picture to tell the story by...and I can't stress how how much I love it
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