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insainity

These thoughts are so ....................distant

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               G . a   c   r   o   s   s  .  t   h   e  .  p   a   g   e

                      hidden insecurities

i   s  r  g  l
     t  u  g  e    to find


But...I...don't...know...what...I'm...looking...for
                   

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Written May 9th, 2005

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  • Angelicwhisper
    May 10, 2005
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    thanks, i thought i would try something different :-)


  • May 10, 2005
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    This is very creative sweetie, you are thinking ... and what you are looking for is on the way or right in front of you! All the best sweet one, thank you for sharing, Annie