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Fire

O god there is a fire on the wall make it hot but don't let it fall,
   There is time i don't care u could fall the hell over, but i wont bare,
  You make me mad how can u see... You stress me out but the cuts  will     bleed.
Don't you stop me you selfish Bitch because tonight is the night u will not forget... You want me here but how can you see, i Don't want to be you  i want to be me... So if you Don't run that's fine for me,
God i hate you so just let me fucken bleed.....

Author notes

Well I am 13 and ya know i dont act like this poem but i know how others feel
Written May 9th, 2005

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