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Fear/Hate

Fear its all you have
Fear its all you got
Fear its all I need
Fear is gunna get you

Hate is what I got
Hate is what I loathe
Hate is what holds me true
Hate is gunna get you

Fear for your life
Fear for your family
Fear for what you hold dear
Fear is gunna get you

Hate is where I am
Hate is when its happening
Hate is all about fear
Without Fear you have no hate.

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Written May 9th, 2005

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  • Painful Tears Fall
    January 3, 2006
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    wonderful?

    this poem is pretty dark if you ask me. you did a gret job but why all the anger? do you really hate the world or do you fear the world? why would you need to be fearful and hateful at the same time? just a few questions?