We look from two sides, and agree,
your dream is like the possibility I see.
Your beauty and truth entice me,
I want to know the source of your wisdom.
Live with me and we will change the world,
patiently we will make it like ourselves,
joyful and passionate, embracing life.
Let us dip our hands in gold,
and gild the world together.
Author notes
My husband of 24 years is a Pisces, and I consider him a person of natural nobility, who is sensitive to the emotional climate, and idealistic. Good luck with your search. 
Written May 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- Pimp up my love poetry by leander.
700 points, ended February 22, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is a beautiful, yet simple poem you have written here, and you managed to write this down with not even one cliché.
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Nice to see you hear dear Margaret
You have definately earned yourself a place in the preliminary list with this one
Leander -
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Thanks very much for the greenie, Leander.
Since I wrote this, we celebrated 27 years of marriage, 30 years together. We are turning silver! I'm glad you like this poem. 
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Thank you Joe, you are very kind. 
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Oh dear that is not an easy combination!!!!!!.lol. I should know being a fish myself.But love is such a wonderful thing and you two obviously share a wonderful relationship. The very first line says so much.... It is always possible to see things from different points of view and agree....
..My very best wishes to both of you.
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yet another smile you have brought to my face. This is very sweet, the things you say about your husband, show that you are truely in love with him, and I think that is one of the greatest gifts one can ever recieve.
Criss
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I think that means you need great patience with one another, which fortunately you have! Thanks for reading and applause, Cheryl.
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I know I am a Taurus and my husband is Aries, but I haven't a clue what that means. Well, other than I am bull (headed).
Nice job.
Cheryl
Cheers!!
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I know nothing of Pisces or any other star-spangled hooplah....but I know I adore this poem. I read it not knowing where it was coming from but your words never fail to impress me....this is lovely, absolutely gorgeous. I love it. Your talent is clear and evident!
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Thank you Morgaine, happy judging!
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Thank you a u r a! It was pure delight to cast my mind back to the early days of this relationship, and I'm happy the emotion came through my words to you.
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This poem is so sweet this tenderness is perfect and exactly what I meant with this contest. I can see you've really looked into the character of the pisces, and I like what you did with it! Morgaine
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margaret, this poem has such tenderness and love .astrology or not -it depicts all the pure emotions any wonderful relationship would be based on -I would say this poem is very very compatable with words and emotions
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Dear Del, thanks! I'm happy you like the poem.
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Hi Margaret,
I am a leo, but I have always thought I had a twin out there somewhere...I have been told there was no liklihood there were two of me but they never would say if that was a good thing or otherwise... .
Nicely penned my friend and good luck to you.
s,
Del
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Thank you Sea, I'm happy you enjoyed it.
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Thank you Hugh. Wow, Edna is a Pisces? Yes, the rhyming is coincidental, but I like it. Since I usually rhyme, the fourth line becomes a bit of a surprise.
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Dear Mari, I don't know astrology either, but there are ways to find out. I'll see if I can find you a link.
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I LOVE the Title
When I saw this poem I thought, "Now that is a really cute idea for a title." Then when I read I thought, "Now that is a devoted couple." Thanks for shaing the love.
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Dear Margaret,
A beautifully expressed, idealistic poem. I can't figure whether the rhyming in the first stanza is just coincidental as the rest is written freestyle but that doesn't in the least detract from the interest of the verse. Applause.
Good luck in the contest (BTW Edna is a Piscean!)
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This is sîmply lovely Marg!
I know not much about zodiac, but I know that I loved this poem!
Can you check how good is two cancer together?
Lovely!
Kisses,
Mari
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Perhaps we didn't change the world, but there are two more people just like us!
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Someone searching? Good luck with the stars...sorry. I guess love is supposed to feel like as a couple you can accomplish anything...and I love the notion of changing the world to our image. I'm going to start work on that right now!
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