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Over You

Perhaps its time
I knew it'd come
To turn my face away
To stand up tall
And grit my teeth
To try and find my way

My heart may break
Some tears may fall
But I know what to do
I will laugh
And I will smile
And I'll get over you

Author notes

...This is short I know. And sort of teen-angsty.... but it was just there. So here it is.
Written May 9th, 2005

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  • TooRainbow silver member
    May 22, 2005
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    Very nice!! The simplicity of this gives it a feel of acceptance and inner strength rather than resignation. A very heartfelt yet practical write. It's melancholy but full of hope, at the same time. I really enjoyed this!
    Sheryl

  • CountryDreamer
    May 11, 2005
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    While it may sound a bit teenangstyish, it's a pure and simple way of feeling when our heart's been broke without our permission. . . hope that whatever it is youre going thru and whomever it is with goes well and that you come out of it with not too many scratches or wounds. . . ~CD


  • RomanticDreamer
    May 9, 2005
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    Ok... perhaps I shall disappear, seem to cause you more pain than happiness.