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When's Next Time?

I wish I could write this differently.
A little bit fancier, a little bit prettier.
I've got too many thoughts in my head right now (plus I'm a little too lazy, and tired),
so I'll come right out and say what I like.

I wish you could have stayed longer.
I wanted to be with you all night.
Just laying there, cuddling...
Watching a movie on the DVD player that works.

I wish I could tell you what I feel.
I know you know, but it's just hard to say it.
Getting the words out is the easy part.
Finding them would take some time.

Maybe next time I'll write it differently.
  Fancier, prettier... a little more like usual.
Maybe next time you'll be able to stay longer.
  Hopefully even all night. I know we'll both sleep well.
Maybe next time I'll be able to tell you what I feel.
  Then you'll know for sure. I'll find some words.

So, when's next time?

Author notes

Hehehe. A little bit different than usual, I suppose. But, hey...
It's here, it's new. I like it, do you?  
Written May 8th, 2005

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  • CoyoteLyle
    May 14, 2005
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    Yup.. she has discovered the site. Look at the comment above you
    And... cuddling up and sleeping is definitely wonderful, and things are still going wonderfully.

  • justifiedsmile
    May 14, 2005
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    romantic

    Fancy and pretty isn't always nessessary, I'd say this was perfect. I like.

    Sooo... things are still going wonderfully it seems... and the thing I always miss and long for with Andy is cuddling up and sleeping... otherwise I toss and turn and never get to sleep.

    I'm glad to read she knows how you feel, has she discoved this site?


  • ccraduenz
    May 9, 2005
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    i love it i really do it shows a person what the other person is trying to say but to shy to! love ya