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sweet casey

Sweet Casey

some days I thank about you some I dream
I dream about seeing you and how you seem

its times like these that I wished you excepted me as your girl
instead we were like brother and sister to the hole world

oh sweet Casey

I told you once and I was afraid to
I told you I had feelings for you

but I had to move to another place
not knowing if I would ever see you handsome face

it hurts inside to know that life will never be the same
the felling gives so much pain

oh sweet Casey

I know you did not wont to brake
the relationship we had know one can take

my brother your sister that's what it had to be
but deep down I wanted you to be with me

as be being you girl
you felt that it would mess up our would

oh sweet Casey

I miss the way you hugged me
it sent butterflies down my spine so I let it be

the way that you seek
to find what was wrong when I was week

I miss the way you spoke with you soft voice
and all I did was give you a choice

oh sweet Casey

all I wonted was for you to see
how much you really mean to me

but manly
I hope you don't forget about me

oh sweet Casey

its hard to thank that you so far a way
its pain to know that we will never stay

together we will never play
but I hope to see you some other day

oh sweet Casey


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Written May 8th, 2005
1. Losing you and trying not to

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  • eternalsol
    August 19, 2005
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    yea but now i have someone new and someone better thanx for the comment


  • WhrUwan2B
    August 19, 2005
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    nice poem and I'm sorry things didn't work out for you! Anywho thanks for sharing and thanks for entering and good luck


  • eternalsol
    August 14, 2005
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    thanx


  • BleakXEternity
    August 13, 2005
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    ooh neato, i liked how this was put together, nicely laid out. would make a good song. the rhymes were nice too. pleasant. good luck in the contest!
    <3shelby