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One To Love Me

As I look into your eyes
I see my reflection,
My face smiling
And eyes sparkling


You have no idea
What you do to me
When you look at me -
It melts me from inside


And as our lips meet,
I feel the ground shake beneath me
And for one moment,
My life seems complete
And I find that it's impossible
To think of anything else
Besides how much you love me



... And the world stops turning...



Lost in your eyes,
I can feel your love radiating
And it makes my heart race high
I wonder why I waited so long
To finally decide


As your hands are caressing mine
I can't seem to keep my mind
On anything
Except the way you're touching me



Is this love?

Is this real?

Could anyone actually make me feel

The way you have been lately?



I can't believe we're really here
My heart can't seem to slow down
Ever since you came around
And slowly made an impact on me


I've always wondered if you loved me
And now I know that it's true,
Now I know that I'll never
Forget you


Because you were the first
And only
One to love me.



Author notes

*sigh* this is pure bliss.
Written May 8th, 2005

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  • JennyNYC
    July 26, 2005
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    I like this poem a lot. Its very sweet. I like how the lines are broken up as if its an inner thought. It gives the poem a lil extra because its figuring something out within oneself as well as a conversation to oneself. I liked that about this poem. Good job

  • a promise kept
    May 13, 2005
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    awesome

    i heart u and matt more than you cld ever imagine...

    ever

    later kid


  • brokenpoet
    May 13, 2005
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    I'm finally glad that you found someone that can make you feel this way.
    It's really nice and special isn't it. *nods head yes*
    Yeah it is "pure bliss" it truly is.
    I hope this feeling lasts for a very long time.
    Infatuation is a powerful thing, that can grow into mature love if you let it grow.

    I'm very happy for you.

    Melissa

    ----------------poem.

    yeah this was very good, and I thought it was very sweet. The way you expressed yourself was wonderful, and your word choice worked very well.

    ... And the world stops turning...

    that made a deep impact on me and really brought this poem fourth.
    awesooooomeness.

    Melissa

  • TheMikeThatIsMini
    May 8, 2005
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    Incredible. Truly incredible. My favorite part is:
    You have no idea
    What you do to me
    When you look at me -
    It melts me from inside

    Great job, Jenny!