It is the sound of raindrops in springtime
as we stroll in the rain hand in hand
it is the loving looks you give to me
running barefoot together in the sand.
The touch of your hand makes me tremble
you hold me close in your arms so tight
the warmth of your body next to mine
tell me I want to stay with you tonight.
The moon is rising over the mountains
the sunset is drifting over the bay
my thoughts of an evening with you
begin to sweep all my senses away.
My heart is beating faster and faster
as I get lost in you eyes of baby blue
as you whisper sweet words in my ear
my heart begins to surrender to you.
Your kisses leave me breathless
they leave me wanting so much more
I surrender to my feelings of passion
I have never felt these feelings before.
Stay with me until the morning tide
love me let our two hearts beat as one
let us fill our desires through our passion
make love to me till the rising sun.
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Written May 8th, 2005
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"make love to me till the rising sun"
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Wow Sandy... Shall I say "Hopelessly Romantic" are we??
Walking down the beach on
a warm, windy night
With you in my arms as I
hold onto you very tight
I tell you that I love you
as each moment passes by
I tell you that I want to be
with you until the day I die
I'll love you with every
breath that I take
I'll love you with every
move that I'll make
I'll love you forever
and always
I'll love you with my everything
for all days
I'll never hurt you
in any way
I'll only comfort you
every single day
I'll wipe away your tears
and I'll comfort your fears
I'll love you for the rest of my life
as I take you in my arms, my loving wife.
Wow Sandy, this was truly romantic and truly wonderful and very lovely and beautiful and wow... just breath taking wonderful!! I am so lucky to have a mother like you I hope you have a wonderful and blessed day today and know that I am always here for you and I am always praying for you!! I love you so much mom!! God Bless You!!
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Thank you my dear friend. This was a wonderful comment. I always appreciate your opinion. God Bless you. Takwe care, Sandy
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Sandy Sandy Sandy. Im thrilled you entered this contest, And this is such a beautiful poem, This is amazing. Its so full of love and passion and desire, It made me want to cry, lol. You have such a way with words, I know why charlie loves you so. All my best to you hun. And good luck in the contest.
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WOW Sandy...this is soooo beautifully passionate. I love this write! Good luck in the contest.
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