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In my eyes

The world is seen with many different eyes,
Surrounded with love and atrocious lies.
Some will read and agree,
Others will sigh and disagree,

When looking down at the earth,
Some only see hell and dark.
The optimistic see life, birth
And destiny, that's what I remark.

Life and death, no more to be said.
We are all free, our life is ours.
No reason at all for life to dread
And no reason to dread imaginary powers.

Man and woman equal, united by love
Male and male, female and female,
Not up to us to judge and speak of.
Destiny is destiny not much more to detail.

Pro-life, what's the deal?
They say it's a crime an abortion,
As if they were talking about an extortion.
I must say that against will, 9 months is surreal.

Death is so hard for some to cope.
The truth, we one day will all.
You never know when you'll fall from the rope,
Just be optimistic and be taken by the enthral*.

Author notes

Feel free to comment, we live in a democracy! I'm pro-choice and proud! I think any kind of racism is sick! Why shouldn't a person be able to marry who ever they love?!!! We are in the 21st century!!! Open your eyes!!!
*enthral is: "to capture the interest or attention of, delight" this in Wbedster's encyclopedic dictionary
Written May 8th, 2005

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  • teardrop gold member
    May 9, 2005
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    Excellent write and great thought provoking. I love it!

    TD

  • pozo
    May 8, 2005
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    Good write although I believe that a child is a child in the womb. I liked the way you wrote this, keep writing and thanks for commenting on my poem
    All the best,
    Pozo

  • davidishere
    May 8, 2005
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    awesome

    man bob dylan would be jealous but these are some good damn lines you have here....great work...shall check out your other stuff to.