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With Your Love

With your love I am never alone
I climb to new heights each day
I live in a different world
That keeps my demons at bay.

When I look into your eyes
I see what I could not before
A love unlike any other
that shocks me to the core.

My heart quickens every day
Every time I see your face
I think of how you calm me
How you make everything fall into place.

My heart is fully yours now
I can think of no other way
than being with you my love
each and every day.

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Written May 7th, 2005

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  • All washed up
    July 22, 2005
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    Gosh every time I read this I get goose bumps.. it just makes me want to cry baby.. I love you so much..
    Justine


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    May 18, 2005
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    I want love like this..*sigh* ...beautiful, absolutely beautiful..Justine is a lucky woman, and you, a lucky man to have her. Great work


  • LaKitKat
    May 11, 2005
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    WOW I love this, it is so sweet and heartfelt. You have talent my boy. Good job, and for such a lovely lady too.
    Kathy
    P.S. who bye the way is my neice. LOL


  • SexyAngel0418
    May 10, 2005
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    awww... This is a really sweet poem for Justine!!! I really love this poem!!! You did a great job!!! Keep up the good work!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 7, 2005
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    Awww... this is lovely poem for Justine. You certainly know how to pull at the hearts strings. This are beautiful words.
    ♥ Kimberly


  • Captain Changa
    May 7, 2005
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    Daniel, this is really sweet and beautiful. Great job on this.


  • All washed up
    May 7, 2005
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    Well love you are a wonderful and caring person.. I can't imagine not talking to you everyday.. or hearing your voice.. dang.. you would have to show me up wouldn't you.. you really did try.. and i think yours is way way way better than any of mine.. so much passion in your words...
    Yours forever
    Justine


  • Simply Ashley
    May 7, 2005
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    Very well written...

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