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my foreknown death

as you slit my wrists
and cry my tears
i sit and watch
you create my fears

because of you
i drink away my better years
you yelled when you found me
but deaf has fallen upon these ears

YOU'VE DONE THIS TO ME!!!
THE BLOOD SHEAD IS YOURS ALONE!!!
WHY CAN'T YOU SEE!!!
MY DEATH WAS FOREKNOWN!!!

Author notes

umm...this is a weird one it was written when i was in church and they were talking about drinking so i wasnt listening...but i dont think anyone will get this it just made me feel better...its weird i understand it but i cant explain it...whatever tho..thnx 4 readin!!!
Written May 7th, 2005

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  • Kukana gold member
    May 10, 2005
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    Thanks for sharing... sometimes I feel like we do not need to know what everything is about... or what it is that we are writing... it is just a part of you that needed to be let out! Good job!
    S~