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I miss you, I hate you.

I'm going crazy without seeing your face.
I miss you.
I need to hold you, taste you, touch you.
I miss you.
I need to grab you, kiss you, love you.
I miss you.

I'm going crazy without seeing your face.
I hate you.
I need to scream at you, laugh at you.
I hate you.
I need to question you, Ask you "Why did you leave?"
I hate you..

I'm going crazy without seeing your smile.
I miss you.
I'm going crazy thinking of how i'll make you cry..
..I hate you.

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Written May 7th, 2005

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  • Squat
    May 14, 2005
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    Amazing

    Awesome. i loved it. its sooo good. exactly what emily said. i know how it feels to hate someone..but like at the same time you love them and wish they were there. this is sooo amazing. loved it! keep it up.


  • XxAmeliaxX
    May 8, 2005
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    Awesome

    Wow!! This is very good Evan! I love it. I get what you mean, you hate someone so much, but then miss them being there. Got cha. Nice job Keep writting.