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Chapter7 lovers untitled THE END

Shanna's borken up body was pale and white. She began to throw up.  She felt sick and tired. Robby was dead now.













































    She walked to his drawer and pulled out his gun. The end of the two lovers. She layed in her blood. Lifless and sad

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Written May 7th, 2005

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  • candyecane2002
    July 11, 2005
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    what the fuck lol


  • -Tainted- LOoVe
    May 7, 2005
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    DAmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
    i told you!
    not to kill her! lmao!
    it was awesome though
    i woulda put more detail in it though! lol....
    awesome!