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Chapter6 lovers untitled

Shanna lifted herself up and gave Robby a "Not now" look. Robby took the hint and walked to the closet."The red or blue tie" Robby asked.
"I like the blue...and some navy slacks"
"With the baby blue shirt?"
"Yep" Shanna said brushing through her hair. Shanna stood up and walked to the bath room. She grabbed her powder and started putting it on.

 Shanna finished up her makeup and began to put on a pair of black slacks. Robby stood there and looked at her. She was the most beautieful thing he had ever saw. Her brown hair that flipped at the bottom and her perfect size 3 body. She had a small frame to be 17. 18 in 3 months. And then there was Robby. Nothing special. I mean don't get me wrong..he was nice looking, but Shanna could do so much better. He had brown hair that was kinda long, he was just 5'6, and he was a bad drinker. But that never phased Shanna. She loved him the way he was. A nothing. Nobody.

 Shanna pulled a pink shirt over her head. It was sleeveless and it had a flower on the side of it. They both walked out the door hand and hand.

 They reached Mindys house. Mindy reached the door and opened it with grace. "Hello"
"Hi" Shanna said to Mindy. A man with gray-black hair came to the door.
"Shanna, Robby, this is my husband Earl."
"Good evening" Shanna said reaching her hand out to Earl.
"Hey" Earl said walking off and leaving Shanna dumb founded.
"Sorry Earl's a tad bit ill" Mindy said smiling her toothie smile.
"It's quite alright." Shanna said.
"Well why are we standing her come in come in" Mindy said. She lead Robby and Shanna to a room that was warm and inviting. In Shanna's mind she was saying WOW.
  Mindy walked in to the kitchen and brought out this fancy food neather of them had ever seen. Mindy said grace and they began to eat. They soon finished. "We must go" Robby said a little rudely.
 "Ok, come back soon" Mindy said. And they were both out the door.
 

   "why were you so damn rude?!" Shanna screamed.
   "I don't like her or Earl"
   "They're nice Robby!"
   "What ever"
   "Robby I'm not fussing with you.!" Robby walked off. Shanna knew were he was going. To the bar."Uh" she said quitely. Shanna took off her slacks and shirt and put her gown on.

   It was about 2:30 when Shanna got that call that would change her life forever."Ring...ring...ring"
   "Hello?" Shanna said
   "Is this Shanna?" Said a voice that was not famillar.
   "Yes..."
   "I have some bad news..." Shanna gasped. "YOur husban Robby, Is in bad shape...he's not gonna live..." At that moment shanna broke down in tears.

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Written May 7th, 2005

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  • -Tainted- LOoVe
    May 7, 2005
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    Omg...I shall cry..cry cry...this was awesome...there must be more..more more more! LoL Do it now now now! LoL great job!