Unique snow patterns
Fluttering down from above
in winter's beauty~
Author notes
I read
Gratz Kentucky
And Blushing Moon
Written November 14th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Your Best Haiku by hot-tamale.
300 points, ended February 4, 2005, 29 entries
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What did you think
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Beautiful picture and poem. Great work.
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You have great picts with your poems! Good luck and thanks for entering.
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Isn't that so cool how each tiny snowflake has it's own unique design! It's fascinating! And this haiku is so beautiful. Just like all of your others that I have read so far! And the picture is very pleasant!
~Kayla
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Susan this Haiku is beautiful, your graphic sure give feeling to your words.... well done my friend.. hugs ~Katie~
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Quite nice. I can read it over and over again. It falls softly like a snowflake, each word touching silently. Great word painting. Yay.
Elle -
Excellent
Hi Susan:
Another beautiful Haiku. Snow can be captivating when you sit and watch it come down and see the beautiful patterns as the flakes touch the glass. Thanks for sharing this beautiful write with us. Bill -
don't touch it!
I moved to FL a little more than a year ago, and I haven't seen snow two times, and I miss it so much!!! Nice write. :o)
~*~Gi~*~ -
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I'm jealous. I love this. Very nicely done. -
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Aww! a gorgeous little Haiku, wonderfully written.
Tracie~ -
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snow is the best part of winter! -
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I luv snow! :) -
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I just love haiku...so much fun to read and write...it always makes you think so much...This is very sweet and beautiful...and like I've said before, maybe I don't hate the snow quite as much as I lead myself to believe....:) Thank you for this poem Susan...Love, Ro -
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nicely said,, well done -
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o0o0o how lovely! i love snow!! i wish that it would snow wehre I live..oh well..maybe someday. :-P -
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I would rate this a 575 out of 576... :)
Hugs and love...
Eddy -
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snow it always captures my mind, heart, and soul....i will sit for hours dreaming I could watch it softly fall like night forever!
((((((huggies)))))
Brianna -
don't touch it!
I love the snow...it's beautiful as it falls day or night. It brings such a wonderful feeling of peace and quiet and slows the hustle and bustle of a world which normally feels that faster is better! (Then Christmas and New Year arrive and when those holidays are over, I'm ready for spring!!!) LOL
Beautiful ku, Sis!
Love Ya!
Maureen -
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oh Susan...you are trying to get me to like the snow...
you make it seem so beautiful here hun...love this picture...
it almost worked for a minute...i almost liked the snow...that is how talented you are
beautiful hun
Hugs, D -
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Lovely, Susan :) I miss the snow.. I moved from Seattle to Phoenix in 1997 and still miss it a lot. I go back for a visit every chance I get.
Your poem reminds me of winters there.. not a lot of snow usually but there's something about the first snowfall, light and beautiful that is totally awesome to me. this poem and the picture are perfect.
Dee -
don't touch it!
I'm trying so hard to appreciate winter but I'm having a tough time...it is sooooo cold LOL but this is absolutely beautiful, it brings out the beauty that winter holds...wonderfully written Susan!!! :) -
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Love this one, Susan:) Snow is sooooooo beautiful:)
{{{hugs}}}
Karen -
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Nice poem. -
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Good one, winter the bliss of the snow kiss. -
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We just got snow tonight, it isn't actually our first but the other snow had melted away. I love walking in the snow..lovely Ku Susan. :)
Red -
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This is lovely, Susan.Living in a place where it never snows, I envy you being able to write about it. And so well too. Chris. -
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Excelent /// Bill -
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Oh, this is so special. Makes me feel Christmassy! -
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Yep excellent write :O) Beautifuly done you did wonderful:O) hehehe love ya Susan hugs and love,Sherry
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