Dripping down her thighs,
Liquid honey
Sweetness, the tangible form of the word
How I would love to drink
From the cusp of her vagina
Clitoris, like the most beautiful
Stained glass window,
Highest on the face of the church
The warmth, so delicately
Fleeting in the night's cold
She drinks from her cup of water
I cannot help but stare
Author notes
::blush::
Written May 6th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Tease me by requiempoet.
345 points, ended June 23, 2006, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is the most beautiful erotica i've read in awhile!!!
it isn't in your face...so to speak!! awesome!!!
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a gorgeous poem. so lovely.
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Cool
I'm not usually into this kind of poem but this one flows well and your imagery and use of metaphor is very interesting. You kind of bring me into that D.H.Lawrence vibe. -
This whole thing reminds me of you -- completely. It seem you have captured yourself in words. You continually amaze me. I lovesss youuu <2. This is one of those amazing "I don't really know what to say but ill babble anyhow" sort of poems. I can imagine you, there, watching some really pretty girl, with pretty bouncy boobs, and cute little butt. giggles Gosh.
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good
it seems to stop suddenly, was it ment to do that? -
That's so amusing, I just went through the same feelings while reading your poetry. ♥
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ok....i need to read you...all of you...you're awesomely amazing...particularily passionate...wonderfully wonderous...creatively crafty...the adjectives don't even come close to reflecting my admiration...
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i definetly admire you this...the sensuality...oh, im buzzing[!]
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I absolutely adore the metaphor you used of a stained glass window, highest in the church...it fits perfectly, and I have yet to hear anyone else refer to it...so I am sure it is an original one! (at the very least, this will earn you some nice brownie points come judgement day!
) Thanks for entering this wonderful piece and good luck!
Peace....
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in case that was too vague...I really like it.
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Well, I tell ya, I had to go get a mirror and look for the stained-glass window. guess the view's different from the outside though. what a great description....what slightly unnerving but oh so flattering imagery. swell.....
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Thanks for pointing out the error. It's actually what happens when you write something in wordpad, and then copy-paste it into the AP text box. It was an apostrophe, and those, along with quote marks, just don't translate. Thanks for the applause!
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this was a great poem. I'm sure that night’s is some kind of spelling error, but if it isn't then I'd like to know what it means >;o)
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