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My Life savor

Daddy, you are my reason for living
I love you more than my mind can comprehend
you having a loving touch to your hugs
you have a special sparkle in your eye
that lets me know, everything is okay

Daddy, no matter when I need you
you are right by my side
when the tears descend from my eyes
you are there to wipe them from my cheek
this is the true love of a dad

Daddy, it takes something special
inside a mans heart to make a father
and I see it in you
I always will
because Daddy, you are my life savor

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Written May 6th, 2005

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  • bleedingarms
    May 11, 2005
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    thanks so much! im glad you could appreciate it! take care


  • Prince Charming
    May 7, 2005
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    Absolute beautiful. An awesome dedication to your dad. I know as a father that things like this are the most precious gifts to a father. This is straight from the heart. You are like said a very happy and lucky person. And its good to show that once a year. And I always feel it that things like a poem like this is much more precious then a expensive gift. The love between a father and his daughter made me smile and very happy This is a great entry to the contest
    Hugs Herman

  • bleedingarms
    May 6, 2005
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    thanks so much, and yes i am lucky and for the reason you arent lucky in this way, i try not to take him for granted... if that made any sence! take care and thanks again!


  • MisJudged
    May 6, 2005
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    this is sweet, i wish i was as lucky.