lord please listen,
I know you are,
as I lay and watch the lights of the cars,
on the ceiling on the walls,
thinking of all the falls,
of good and bad,
when I was sad, glad, or mad,
Iknow you listen as I prey,
I know you watch me thru the day,
help me thru,
make every day a new,
let the people I love make it too,
your all I have and all I know,
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Written May 6th, 2005
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Wonderful expression of love for God.
This is such a dear prayer.I am sure that God was both listening and that He is very pleased,as well!Your simlpcity is what moves Him most.We should always be transparent with God.He knows us better than we know ourselves! -
This is a nice prayer that is put into poetic form. You have a typo in your 8th line (no space between I and Know.) I am assuming that you are using poetic freedom of writing thru instead of through, so if you want to fix your space this is very nice. God Bless, Penny
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