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True feelings

I think i like him
Or maybe i don't
I just have these feelings in my head for him they never stop they won't
Breaking up was so hard
But i have to move on
He is so sexy
But yet he care
All the memories of me and him there in glare
Love
I want some one to send me this  boy thats so sexy people will think god sent him from above
that is a dream
And love is harder then what it  seems
Long lasting kiss
thats what i miss
But it is over with me in him
Y can't i just 4 get about him
I don't want to ruch into things
Love But god will find me and i will get what he brings

Author notes

This is about breaking up with this boy ralphie i was with him for 7 months and he broke my heart and some how i can't get over him like i tell people i am but really i'm not but i do like this new boi now
Written May 5th, 2005

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  • Akiva
    May 11, 2005
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    Jessy its LOVE!!!! Its like every day u get up and all u can think about is him! yeah it called LOVE i've been thow it and i'm still in it! Its hard but soon or later it will fell like a dream and it will turn into a night mear and all u want to do is wake up but u can't IT hard but u'll get thow it! i promiss u that one!!
    lov ya girl
    Jacky
    Edited on Jun 03, 9:36 because ''.


  • May 6, 2005
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    dont worry jessica, you're still young, you'll forget about him soon!