Things are so scary right now
but I will see you through
you will never be alone during the fight
I'll be with you every step of the way
Maybe I won't be there physically
but I'll always be with you spiritually
your thoughts of me, my thoughts of you
that's what will always connect us
Don't worry about me right now, dear
concentrate on yourself
you are more important to me right now
than any of my little problems
I would sacrifice anything I could
just to make sure you're OK
just say the word and I am there
in less than a heartbeat
I'll stay up with you till you can sleep
I'll talk to you until you stop crying
I'll give you every bit of strength
that I hold within my body
I'll mentally send it all to you
so that you will remain strong
you can fight this and you know it
you are a fighter for life
Nothing can bring you down so easily
Nothing will stop you now
Nothing will stand in your way
I'm holding your hand each step of the way
You are in my thoughts always
and I have so much faith in you
you are such a strong, beautiful person
and I know you can get through this
You are not alone in this fight
we are all fighting right beside you
to keep you with us longer
to hold onto you and continue to live
We will not give you up so easily
you are such a precious gift
and no one here is willing to let you go
I am not going to let you go
This demon will not win
we can crush it together
in your heart, in your soul
we are all helping you fight
You have so much strength within you
Physically, mentally, emotionally, spiritually...
even though it may not seem like it, you do
because you have everyone right beside you
They will give you strength
I'll give you anything you need
You will never give up or lose
as long as we are here
As long as you don't give up on yourself
you can win this and we are all here right beside you
giving you strength, physically, mentally, emotionally and spiritually
and because of this, you are the strongest person I know
Therefore, I know you can do this
you can fight this and you will win
your last breath will be your own
and you will live many happy years to come
Author notes
I have something to say about your, say this isa prewrite rule...When something is entered in your contest, you get an IM saying that there is either and prewrite or new entry in your contest. It will tell you whether it is a prewrite or not. But anyway, this is a prewrite.
I love you so much, dearest. You're not going to give up and you will not lose. We are all there with you and don't ever forget that. ♥
Written May 5th, 2005
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- Free write Everyone is welcome by Yawgmoth.
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Wow! A wonderful, heatfelt, emotional poem. I know very much how much she means to you and I wish her the best as well. I'm sure she can do it too. She a strong person who won't give up without a fight and with the strength of her friends, how can she lose?
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Ohhh Rose hon this is so sweet. *sniffle* You're right, she WILL get through it, and aww. *hugs*
-lauren -
She was in tears. Thank you for your comment.
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This poem is about a friend of mine with cancer...It has nothing to do with God. Anything I would write that would have anything to do with that would be an atheist poem. Thank you for your comment though.
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You're right. It has to do with cancer. She is going through such a tough time, so I decided to write this for her. Thank you for your comment.
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Wow, this is amazing. Very good-I hope whoever recieved it cried. lol. It's a very good piece!
~Kat -
"This demon will not win
we can crush it together
in your heart, in your soul
we are all helping you fight" my girlfriend is going through a similar problem...she is always made at god...i do not know what is wrong with her...!!! good poem though keep writing. -
Excellent
I agree that this is very good and I thought maybe it had to do with either cancer or depression or maybe both. I am not sure what the first thing is either. But this was extremely well written and should give encouragement to the person in which it was intended for because it encourages me. -
Rose check out my poem addiction.You might like it.
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To those I love, I try to be the best I can be. She deserves every ounce of love the world could possibly give her. Tory is a beautiful, lovely person far superior to me.
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Rose,like I said someone is very lucky!!! I came back to read what she posted and I still have the chills.You sound like a wonderful person.
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Perhaps I will. Thank you for the comment.
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Thank you.
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i wrote somethin similar to this its called for all the soldiers if u wanna check it out. pretty good
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Thank you for your comment. The special someone this is for commented just after you.
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this is really good, i like it alot
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I can't begin to tell you what this means to me...You truly are a beautiful Rose in my life, each day blooming more brilliantly than the one before...It means so very much to me to have such support right now...Your words brought tears to my eyes...I will never give up my fight...I truly am blessed to have you in my life...What a beautiful daughter you are...Thank you.
All my love
Tory Lin
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Very good.Someone is lucky to have someone like you by thier side.Everyone needs someone like you.
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Thank you for your kind words, though I'm not sure what L.A.U.S.D. is. The title probably implies something completely different than what it is and I realize that, but I couldn't think of anything better.
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this was pretty good but i'm not gon lie to u when i first saw the tittle i thought it was a poem about all this bullshit at the L.A.U.S.D. but i'm glad that it wasnt good job
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I wasn't really in any mood...I just wanted to show a certain special someone that I will be there for them no matter what. Thank you for your kind words.
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that poem is really deep
i liked it a lot
mayeb i will have to check out your other poems because this was great
i like that is was deep
it was filled with emotion
what kind of mood were you in when you wrote it?
anyways i thought it was excellent!
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Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you understand because I have always thought this way.
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Extremely moving and touching.
Really, really touching...I can't say I love it or something because this isn't that kind of poem...it's a poem you have to ponder, to think about, to register in your mind. It's really beautiful, a true tribute to this person. It just shows you that the very best poetry always comes straight from the heart. -
Your right. But I was just looking at the poem itself. Not at the meaning or whatever.
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Thank you for commenting...When I write something from the heart, I usually don't pay attention to my wordings. The emotion matters more than the words used. As long as the eprson it is for can be touched by this, that is all that matters.
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Thank you for your kind words. This person really does mean a lot to me.
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Nice poem... bit long, but nice!
At some spots the words aren't chosen very well like
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I'll give you every bit of strength
that I hold within my body to you
there is one you to much...
and...
to keep you with us for longer
isn't that supposed to be... to keep you with us longer?
Well, if you don't count this, It's a very good poem, I like the feeling it gives me... that was all I had to say
Amaris
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This is so very touching. You obviously care a great deal about this person. Sometimes just knowing people care means so much. Your words are so sweet. I am sure whoever it is for will be very touched.
Cherry -
I like your insight. Thank you for your comment. This is actually for my AP mother, but it is so interesting when some people can get something else entirely from it.
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at frist i was thinking about a young child and his/her mother talking to them saying all of that. then i was thinking about someones father/mother in a hospistal bed, family all around and trying to give them support. made me read it all the way thru because it was so deep. love this. the pic of the bird makes me think of a bird feeding and caring for its young. brilliant write
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Thank you for your kind words. This woman has touched me deeply and she deserves anything I and everyone else can give her, not to mention more.
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Thank you for your kind words. I care for this person a loot, though not romantically. I'm glad you know how it is and understand though. Thanks so much for commenting.
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I love this. It's so sweet how you say that you will always be with them. It's sweet because that's what everyone really wants is someone to be with them through their problems! Great write. Keep it up
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Very nice
Wow this is so nice. This is such a touching poem about what it means to really care about someone else. I loved the little phrase:
I'll give you every bit of strength
that I hold within my body to you
Now that is true love......to be willing to lay down all you have for the other. I feel that way for my true love. I would die for her and lay down all I have ot keep her safe. So I can identify with this poem very well. Nicely written and I hope it truly touches the one it was written for. -
Thank you for commenting. This is for a special person in my life who is going through a hard time.
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this is very well written with lots of emotion that came from within and the flow is very good also. you did a nice heart felt job on this
love and light
blaze
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