How hard is life,
noticing that you're still alive
A prisoner in your body
still calling the deaf death.
How painful is life
when the friend becomes an enemy
when the lover breaks the promises
and when the friend was a friend.
How crazy is this life
when you're a stranger between strangers
they do not understand you
they do not hear you
and how the death can hear.
Author notes
The poem is about this life, and how it's hard/painful/unfair.
Written May 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- Show me your love, Show me your hatred. by xoxpaperdollxox.
300 points, ended May 27, 2005, 12 entries
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darn good
I liked the line How crazy is this life when your a stranger between strangers.. its a realiy true poem you are a gifted writer... -
WOW! That was really deep. I liked it and it showed alot of emtions. It was a bit short but still liked it. Keep it up! Stacey
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