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Walk of Purgatory

Alone in my dark shadow
My thoughts so shallow
The feeling of death looms
As the graveyard blooms

One way trip, where I don’t know
As the winds of reckoning blow
Trapped pain of leaving friends
Their tears, the pain it mends

No more celebrating, no more fun
They asked me if I’d ever learn
The aura of the celestial beings
Shines and provides no meaning

As I walk this long road
The endless walk of purgatory
I want no sympathy, just help
Shackles that bind, please meld

Let me stay, at least for her
Even though, my spirit she burned
How did I drift so far away
Just emotions with which you play

Live in the night
Push away the light
Tonight we face fate
The night we become late

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Written May 4th, 2005

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  • Bohemian Poser
    May 5, 2005
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    I think this is your best write so far.