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Imaginarium

My mind drifts away,
Far from reality on this imagined day.

I grasp the bottle tightly,
And drank everything away.

I fill my veins with poison,
I drowned them in fakeness.

This hole I was found in,
This so called bliss, that I’ve been lost in.

Drunken feelings arise,
From the imagined bottle, from my heart created by lies.

I push and pull,
Into my lusting highs.

In you I see his face,
I feel his kiss as you kiss me.

His saliva I now taste,
He's rubbing me; your hand on my knee.

I want to be with him in her place,
I’m still in Imaginarium.

With my phony drink,
And my dreamed gun.

Each appear with a blink,
Then there's more imagined drunken fun.

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Written May 4th, 2005

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  • TheMechanicalAngel
    May 19, 2005
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    wow, this is.....holy shit dude. this is awesome, and while it has a lot of the drunkeness in it, kind of like an uncaring feeling, it has a lot of despair too. the flow is wonderful and your words are chosen well. A beautiful, articulate, and well described poem. I love it.