You watched the blood seep from me
and drip from my senseless limbs
where it joined its comrade that
flows from iridescent eyes
into a pail of darkness;
an abyss now over full,
yet still crying out for more
of your vicious source of thrill.
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um dee dum dee dum... tell me what you think
Written May 4th, 2005
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very cool and dark. you did a really good job, i especially liked your choice of words. good write
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well thank you for the comment sweetie
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Dark and awesome. You did a realy good job on this one. I was hobing for more, like breaking it down in each emotion. I love the gloomy feel to it and your word use is outstanding. I love it.
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