How can I say Goodbye to the other half of my soul?
How can you walk away,leaving me behind with the clutter?
How can I learn to live for the future, without you to hold my hand?
How can I stop living in the past, when tomorrow,today will be past?
What if I wake alone, lost in the memory of what used to be?
What should have been? What might someday, be our future?
You can't leave, don't go...I need you, I want you, I Love you.
You love me,I feel it, see it in your eyes, taste it in your kiss.
Don't be afraid, I will never stop loving you, I wouldn't know how.
Don't cry and say you HAVE too, you can stay here, in my arms.
Don't say Goodbye
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Written May 4th, 2005
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There is passion in your pain. There is longing in your need to cling to that which is familiar. It makes me mourn to read words that must endure the tests of time. Yours always do. Love is unending and encompasses all thought and sense of being. This poem is beautifully sad and tells a tale of lasting love. Beautiful!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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what a romantic poam!!!!, i loved it too, ya r soo talented, keep this up...
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Sad and yet nicely written. It is tough when someone walks out because we still feel for them, but the love has died in their eyes. Hurts to move on but we must, and time is a great medicine!
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i liked this poem a ton.
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Awesome
Great... sadness comes from me .. remindness that it is....
Oh well
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wow great job, you wrote it wonderfully. i can feel the emotion and pain and need. i loved it great job.
much luv
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very good and very sad i love this piece very well written oh and yes very nice mom hahaha lol jk bye bye
adam
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Awesome
AWESOME Mommy, prefect poem. I give it 2 thumbs up...good job.
Jessica
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It's great. Really beautiful
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Keep on the Good work!
wow this is a very emotional I love it very much cause it comes from your feelings and heart and write it out in a poem Awome Write thank you for entering my contest I really appreciated it
-Mina
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Goodbye is never an easy word to say...but you've voiced it very well
Ruth
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Wow, I'm not quite sure what to say about this. Perhaps when I regain my composure a little, and stop shaking, something more will come to me.
Your words have cut their way to my very soul. This is a beautiful poem, the essence of what emotional poetry is to me.
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Beautiful write... ash
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