Her eyes showed longing, pain and fear.
Her lips spoke without moving.
Her scars told her story.
She sat crying, the world passing by,
No one spoke to her, they just left her to die.
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just a short poem i wrote ages ago from a random thought in my head
Written May 4th, 2005
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I really did enjoy this poem and I think that many others would to. Just promote it.
Hugs Nicci
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I loved how you kept this short but quick to the point. you deffinately got the point across without being too wordy!
Hugs Nicci
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awesome shortness! Lol, thanks for the comment on my story! I'll get back to reading some more of your poems and such in a bit. But great work, keep it up!
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hmm, i know this feeling and i feel like she does sometimes and IT SUCKS! nice poem to write, maybe one day you can make it longer..just a thought. nice write though, l8az love ya sky xxxx
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short and beautiful.
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