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Love-Happiness




If you'd place your palm on my heart
You'd forever know how love feels
For the depths of my soul sings art
With every note my angel reveals

Love replaces the misery
With kindness, compassion and care
And all that is within me
I'd bear each burden with love sincere

Embrace this kiss of poetic kind
As I send all my love'n to you
Entwined our heartbeats flutter divine
Soaring passionate eyes of blue

I tenderly plant a fertile seed
For I myself have felt alone
So that you will grow and fill a need
And can share the love I've shown


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Thanks for reading me, much to all! -Timothy
Written May 4th, 2005

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  • legsofstone
    June 1, 2005
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    i love this poem it fines away into my soul really good pice of work keep it up well done


  • adios muchachos gold member
    June 1, 2005
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    XLNT !!!!!

    Lovely poem Timothy. In all greatness there is simplicity.
    Best to you in your contest!

    John-Las Vegas

  • Art of Ignorance
    June 1, 2005
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    This poem is just pouring with love. Each sentence tugs at my heartstrings, each word just makes me feel more and more emotion. You're very talented, and I can tell your emotion is just seeping into this poem, along with love.

    Best wishes, and good job


  • Vampstress silver member
    June 1, 2005
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    This poem touched me so much as it seemed to describe my circumstances exsactly. Amazing. It flowed incedibly well and the rhyming was very well done. (I am a bit of a fan of rhyming myself.) The words are also beatiful. My favourite lines; "Embrace this kiss of poetic kind" and "I tenderly plant a fertile seed" these lines can make me feel just on their own. well done.


  • GypsySyah
    May 31, 2005
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    I tenderly plant a fertile seed
    For I myself have felt alone
    So that you will grow and fill a need
    And can share the love I've shown


    This was by far my favorite part!! You did a beautiful write here! The reader can feel the love you offer! Well done!! Peace, Syah

  • jc44447
    May 31, 2005
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    this work captures the feeling of love and helps to discribe how he believes it should feel.


  • raspberry Greeters member
    May 31, 2005
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    Excellent... Amazing .. great write as a poem... and love wonderfully captured.. after soo long at ALllpoetry.. Good luck and keep posting more of such works..


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    May 31, 2005
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    Love is our only need.

    ~My Beloved Timothy~
    Your wonderful and filled with true love indeed poeticpieces is right
    You love with all your soul and share in the divine white light.
    I have felt your love touch me as one pair of finely tuned velvet gloves
    And there are sands and many fine poetry seeds for all of us to share
    The only reason to be here is to love and to feel complete and not be lonely
    I know if I had the chance I would take you by the hand and look straight into your eyes and tell you darling the sun will rise you don’t have to go underground your found when you feel no one is around. I know you have felt alone as your heart falls and cries to another mercurial sunrise. I’ve placed my tender palms on the centre of your heart, knowing that true love never dies and never parts. Once again beautifully penned in all your timeless grace and loving passion my new old friend. We reap the seeds we sow in loves yesterday, and today our harvest has grown ten fold in our warm compassionate rain.
    ~All the best to you and yours, AngelEyes711~
    6/1/05 12:10:47 AM
    Edited on May 31, 11:17 p.m. because ''.


  • UnchartedPoet
    May 31, 2005
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    This was a beautiful write, I must say I can't compare to the other comments give, as I wouldn't seem so bold and full of print. You have a wonderful peaceful care in your flow of words, very calming, warm arms wrapped around one another, true love.....great job.....enjoyed all of it.

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    May 22, 2005
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    Brilliance TRUE GOLD I love you heart & soul



    I’ve placed my palm on your beautiful heart
    And found the place were true love starts
    Your soul sings in love and timeless beauty
    Nobody darling pens love as you in sincerity

    I can’t stop loving you, Love me do,
    But love US in truth, your soul sings
    Every heavenly chord in my heartstrings
    Darling you’re the happiness the sunshine brings

    You have such a tender way to light all our hearts
    Today and yesterday Love will heal the misery
    Love is our only need I only wish you’d come back together again
    Two as one best of friends upon a journey that will never end

    We could sing for hours above the Lords rain showers
    Touching our hearts deep within our ordinary wine in time
    Oooooooooo we dance we sing of a love that is kind and sincere
    Forever you will sing in love divine this is your gift for all of golden time

    Your kisses of love are the poetic kind
    I’ve search the seven seas
    Yet you still stand by US in destiny

    I know you always send your loving to all of us
    I never want to see you dance alone or feel out of place
    Who is the one that sings to you above the time trials of the human race
    All your lifetime you’ve shared the love in your heart as one mercurial sunrise

    My only wish for you and your family, that all your dreams do then come true.
    Whatever it is you need from love let us know so we all can plant seeds to grow
    I only know the road of my soul, and the café down the cobblestone cerise street
    Where we never seem to meet in the peace of the night’s sweet singing reverie

    I never plan to write anything to you my beloved ~Timothy The Poeticweaver~
    Seems we carry a silver thread that binds us in the love of the summer sun
    I wish for you love and all the happiness you can be for now is your time to shine
    You carry the lightness of the heavens and you show love in everything you do

    My hope and dream is all that you long for comes true
    To the sweet tune of I can’t stop loving you as you sing love me do
    Timothy every song you Penn is inscribed on the shores of heaven
    I could go on I must stop the clock and hope your love shines on and on
    For you have a timeless gift for all of eternity to sing the Lords heartfelt songs.

    When others praise you I am dancing free and so happy for you and your family
    You know me I am just who I am, and my story is not out of the ordinary
    If you inspire my heartstrings than strum me once again my new old friend
    It does not matter who is who its your heart and your love that needs to share
    I’ve been aware you’ve grown and I’ve planted all the seeds you’ve show in care
    As if you heart and love has always been dancing on air here there and everywhere.


    ~All the best to you and your family and one day when you feel fine we shall dance on the shores of the divine. Love is as easy as 1 2 3, if this is the way you desire love to be, Namaste Blessed Be, AngelEyes711~



    5/22/05 1:19:03 AM
    Edited on May 22 because ''.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    May 5, 2005
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    great!!

    time another wonderful heart felt piece that sings from the heart of another hopeless romantic poet the rhyme and flow is wonderful good luck and good luck in the contest
    love and light
    blaze


  • Whispering Winds
    May 4, 2005
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    Timothy,

    This is a very beautifully written write you penned here. Your heart is pure, and full of love
    And it made my eyes fill with tears
    Cause I know that your heart is true
    And love is all you have in you

    Thanks again for sharing your heart of love
    And every time i think of you
    I look to the heaven above
    And send all my love to you

    This is a lovely write and i love it.
    Many wishes to you in the contest my friend.
    Much love I send,
    Tammy


  • Sunkissedrose
    May 4, 2005
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    True love, while sometimes it's not like the fairytales, it does exist, in the hearts of those willing to try. Simply a beautiful loving piece. Lil Tim is right, you are so very loveable
    ~Carrie


  • peaceinmind26
    May 4, 2005
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    Excellent!

    I love it, I love it! s You have that way of sharing your love when no-one else has it to share, and therefore you give them some to have and give away as well, a circle of love indeed!

    Love Me~


  • poeticpieces
    May 4, 2005
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    Perfect Pen Of Love!

    What a wonderfully penned piece, just reading it allowed it flows so perfectly, as I know that's just the way you and your reader's like it....But you know what Dad, every piece you pen almost has love in it, me thinks you are very lovable, heehee! And I love you for that, and I'm glad I have you for a dad and I can see how your love shines daily! Thanks for yet another loving side of you!

    -lil Tim <<<<Me.


  • PonderingPoetess
    May 4, 2005
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    A beautiful capture of exactly how true love not only feels, but how it transcends us beyond all our wildest expectations. An awesome expression of something that is never easy to capture in verse...

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