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under the moon

As I talk away the night with you,
I sit in amazement and awe, it's true,

Maybe it's your charm or passion I see,
It could be your honesty and frankness with me,

We laugh and we talk as we enjoy the night,
Hours keep passing until it is light,

I'm having a feeling I can't quite explain,
Like the comfort you feel in a mid-summer's rain,

My heart's filled with passion, let me share it with you,
Dance with me darling, under the moon that is blue.

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Written May 3rd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Silmarwen10
    May 4, 2005
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    This was great i really like it it's nice and it rymes well great job keep it up and thanks for entering my contest