Oh how you twiddle with our ill tempered minds
The lamentable way you torment us
Never giving in, eating away at us with weather of all kinds
But if one was to really look at you he may realize
If it wasn’t for you, old man winter, the sight of spring would never really open our eyes
Author notes
I wrote this today in study hall, and I thought it was pretty good so here it is.
Written May 3rd, 2005
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I like this, it's simple, yet true. I like that balance that it speaks of. I'm a firm believer in that if there was nothing bad we would have nothing to compare the good too, and so would have no idea of what good was. A great write
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yeah you were right! it is pretty good. NO! IT's AWESOMLY GOOD! writted very well.. i usually dont look at nature poems but this peom changed my mind!
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