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sea

waves mighty crash bang
rippling little gems around
whooshing slowly still

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Written May 3rd, 2005

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  • loualoui
    May 4, 2005
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    Another good Haiku. I especially love the middle line... a beautiful image there. Mmm, nice... makes me want to go to the seaside!


  • Elrenia
    May 4, 2005
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    Nicely done. You do not need the comma at the end, though. Thank you for sharing.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 3, 2005
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    Short but good.
    Good write.
    Thanks for sharing this.