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blue bells

burst of life blooming,
heads hang low bells start to ring,
swaying in the breeze,

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Written May 3rd, 2005

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  • DeAnges
    May 14, 2005
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    Hmmmmmmmm very nice. Don't know exactly was the image that you were trying to convey, but it definately does bring various images to mind. Great job, good luck.


  • loualoui
    May 4, 2005
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    What a beautiful Haiku Lou... I love it!
    The bluebells are everywhere at the moment; they are so beautiful and this haiku captures that perfectly.
    Good job! Nice to see you posting again!
    Love Lou ..xx

  • Choo Choo
    May 3, 2005
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    So nice

    nice haiku about blue bells.
    do you know thair is a train on blue bell?
    I love train!
    Keep up the good work. dude.