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strange angels keep decent company

"Strange angels keep decent company" a wise woman once said.
Was she right? I don't know, but it stuck in my head.
I never thought I'd meet one, I doubted they were true.
I never knew knew an angel, until I was familiar to you.

And you're strange, no doubt, but very kind.
You see emotions, all things you find.
Sometimes I wish you weren't quite so good;
it reminds the rest of us of us that it's how we could

be, if only we were a little better- but we're not.
You're the better sides of all of us that we all have fought.
But I think it's not your fault, and probably better in the end-
so here's your birthday poem, you, my incomparable friend.

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Written May 3rd, 2005

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  • city light illusion
    May 23, 2005
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    omgosh this was awesome! i thought it was going to be able some old love or something... then it was a birthday poem! i had loved it from the beginning and that little twist in the end added to it for me. marvelous!

  • Miyako777
    May 5, 2005
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    Hahaha, just had to read it again....

  • Miyako777
    May 5, 2005
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    Oh I love this one...