A blood-red moon
Smiles down on you
As the sky bleeds dry
And the stars slightly rust
Dark is the night
And quiet is the wind
That soothes the angry earth
With it's gentlest caress
Taste the sweetest nectar
Of the newly ripened fruit
Kiss the softest outside
And feel the juice within
Bruise the tender surface
With your greed filled lust
Consume the forbidden fruit
And revel in the flavor
Drink of the purest trust
And fill the void with hate
Slaughter the last confidence
And saturate with fear
Rape the naivest innocence
To feel the pleasure mount
Cripple the guiltless soul
Only to pity yourself
Give in to evil temptation
Lose control and reach out now
Go ahead and fuck the child
Resign yourself to the tortures of Hell
Ruin a life and taint a world
Kill yourself before I can
Swallow a bullet and die at last
Go to Hell, I'll meet you there
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
This is a really good write - thank you
Did you have a look at what it was that I was sort of looking for? I'm looking for the PUNISHMENT that will fit the crime, not the crime itself ... could you possibly enter something along those lines
-
I know how you feel there I HATE child molesters. My present boyfriend aged 19 touched up a 14 year old and I could have KILLED him (this was when we weren't going out and before he reformed his characteristics). But his uncle was a priest who molested his cousins and it is really scary stuff. I hate them as I say and I know many men that wouldn't turn down a quick try if they were alone with a 13+ year old. Apparently in Britain they are going to make the offense of having sex and sexual contact with someone over 13 as not so bad and not classed as Paedophilia... That's just sick!! I share your concerns and anger and I also think this is a good poem to represent the seven deadly sins as you have mentioned quite a few of them in this piece. Thanks for entering and good luck.
-
child molesters need to be stopped This was a very good poem. Thanks you for enetring it into my conetst
-
A write which leaves no room for doubt,the poetry grabs the reader by the throat and dares the reader to not agree with the atrocity of molestation and abuse and whilst I rarely agree with the usage of the "F" word within poetry it is not out of place here,the write is angry-in-your-face-you-sonofabitch- poetry and if this was read out at at a slam open mike session it would undoubtedly be well recieved.
I echo your thoughts,there is no excuse,no explanation and no need for a man to defile a child,I would vote for chemical castration at the very least but you know why the laws are not changed so that these heinous predators aren't contained ?Because it is men that break the laws of morality and men that enforce the law of the land,I am not anti men,I have dear men friends that are like Brothers to me,but I feel if society left justice to women we would have less of these crimes and therefore less victims -
Yes, Dear, I could tell. I share your feelings. Thank you for entering this very worthy piece. Hugs, Patricia
-
Thanks
Thanks you guys. I had just read an old article in a magazine about this girl who had been molested by her uncle and it pissed me off. I'm glad I was able to do this subject justice. Thanks for reading. Love you all! ~JOY~THE~GODDESS~ -
Awesome write. Yes child molesters should die. Incredible style and beautifuly written.
-
Kill all the child molesters! Yay! I love this Joy, beautifully written. I think that the first stanza would have to be my favorite though.
~Stormy~ -
Yay, this is fucking awesome. I love it this is one of my faves from you. You did an awesome job on this one. I love it and I agree wholeheartedly with this one. awesome, just awesome.
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
4 old applause
