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Tattered Belle

Tufts of tattered, auburn curls
Woven in loose-hanging braids
Paled porcelain, chipped and of age
A jumper left bleakly frayed

Unfastened buttons hang by threads
A pleated skirt, whose patches show
The curls hide under her bonnet
Glass eyes fail to mask such woe

Upon a crammed, neglected shelf
The years have left her to the dust
Such favored a toy in her day
A forsaken belle, destined a fate unjust



Author notes

I wrote this poem about an aged, porcelain doll, stored away on a shelf and forgotten about.
Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • Carlie
    May 3, 2005
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    Thanks, you too =)

  • Eva Destruction
    May 3, 2005
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    I really love this! I could picture this doll through your words. Great word smithing. Good luck in the contest.