Shatter the glass of my fragile psyche
Encase my heart in a block of ice
Burn my emotions with heated words
Seal my soul in a torture chamber
Beat my body to a bloody pulp
Just please my love, DON'T LEAVE ME.
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I don't know where this came from, I don't even have a girlfriend right now. *shrugs*
Written May 2nd, 2005
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I can peronsally relate to this. But thats only because I've been an abuse relationship and still I thought aslong as he is happy. Bullshit. But, anyway....again, this being the thrid poem of yours I've read, its nicely done for only being 6 lines long. Packed full of emotion.
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i love it
i like it, its very emotional and like afflicted said it gets right to the point, nice write -
hmm, different maybe.. Short and quite simple, straight to the point. A powerful poem that says everything in only a few lines. I like it. Good luck with the contest! another good write... : )
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In case you didn't notice, I wrote this for a contest for short poems that would make the reader cry. Oh, and I don't have a boyfriend considering the fact that I am a lesbian nor do I have a girlfriend. And, my author's comments specifically say that I don't know where this came from.
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Ok, You are a happy person, I think your ice has melted. Awwwwww how sweet. Open up a little and you'll see that people do care and if you sent me a pic I'd cuddle with it at night.
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O k...
That was not to bad but then it was short
I think if you have a boyfriend you should
show him the time of his life don't get upset
Think About everyone you fell pain so
does everyone..
His dumbness
Sir Xantech
or
Quad Cannon
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