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In Disguise

The ocean plateau
a calm display of beauty-
engulfs a sweet life.

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um dee dum dee dum. i hope you enjoyed
Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • josh-13
    May 3, 2005
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    Beauty portrayed for the time is quick to swallow you through the tide.

  • Liexdeceievexdecay
    May 2, 2005
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    This is a sad, yet very good haiku. My favorite line is "a calm display of beauty." In my mind, I suppose that you're portraying a beach or ocean. This is an amazing haiku. Keep up the great work! ~ ~

  • Nightmare Artist
    May 2, 2005
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    sounds like being on the shores of a crystal clear beach....kewl