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I love you..

Baby
There's no dought in my mind
That i don't love you
I've loved you since I first layed eyes on you
its alright if you do not feel the same
But when you fall I will catch you
when you cry I will be your shoulder
when you need to talk for hours on the phone
just say it
there i will be
for I love you and that will never change

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Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • J8085
    May 2, 2005
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    mmmmmm good poem. Short and sweet. That kinda relationship just makes you long for them to realise that they feel the same too just dont want to admit it. sweet. poem, keep up nice writes